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the text is well-struc­tu­red; lin­kers are used

 

 

 

there is an in­tro­duc­tion and a con­clu­si­on

 

 

2nd check: con­tents

the main points of all 7 pa­ra­graphs have been ac­coun­ted for

 

 

3rd check: lan­gua­ge

there are hard­ly any gram­ma­ti­cal mis­ta­kes
the spel­ling is cor­rect

 

 

 

the choice of words is ap­pro­pria­te (to the point and not too sim­ple)

 

 

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